Sunday, September 21, 2008

intro 2 of cause essay

Intro 2 of cause essay

I strongly advise bi-annual vehicle safety inspections to ensure that the roads we travel on are safe for everybody. Not only would this practice heighten he safety of the vehicles traveling on the roadways, but early detection of part failure is important rather than driving with ignorance to have a break-down.

2 comments:

johngoldfine said...

This is the back end of the graf--up front we need some human interest, a story, something from the life and experience and observation of RR.

Anonymous said...

Keep up the good work.