Sunday, September 21, 2008

intro 1 of cause essay

Intro 1 of cause essay

There are many causes for a parts failure to leave people stranded when their vehicle breaks-down. Could be a worn part internally, a mileage issue, collision damage, lack of maintenance, to name some examples. There are a lot of early detection type of inspections that can catch things early before they become too bad.

1 comment:

johngoldfine said...

Same comment as intro 1--you've got a clear direction but right now it's reading more like a technical piece than a general essay.